^ ^ I cant wait to see the final version! This is pretty good for a rough draft.

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It's not fair when you say that I didn't try... I just dont wanna hear it anymore... -Three Days Grace

Whoa, I just posted this thing like 2 minutes ago, lol. Glad to see that you like it.

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There is no such thing as right or wrong, just people who think they know.
--Faron

^ ^ You're very welcome.

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It's not fair when you say that I didn't try... I just dont wanna hear it anymore... -Three Days Grace

kickass, dude you're getting better all the time!

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"I'm not swearing a$$hole!!!!!!"

You know, when you do such fantastic drawings, it just makes me want to try harder. And I think that's why I admire you so much.
Keep doing your best, and I'll keep doing my best.


Participate in the contest. I hope you win.


Keep following your dream.

lol, thats what I did to becom good. just find somone better then me and try to get to their level.

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I could be the best there is, but would'nt acknowledging this and becoming cocky make me the worst?
--Faron

I have taken enough time away to get what I needed done. I am happy to say that I am now an Eagle Scout in Boy Scouts, and hopefully this acheivement will lead to others.

But I did not come here to talk about me, I came here to help you further down the path of being an artist. Before we begin I want to say just how good this looks compared to other things. Your increasing skill is making it harder and harder for me to critique you on your work. This is not only a benefical thing for me (helps me learn how to critique), but this is also a definite sign that your are improving.

Now, on with the show.

Kiba here suffers from a multitude of anatical problems and I'm having a hard time addressing each issue with a type of metaphor that will hold your attention, so I going to give the overall message for this and alot of the peices I've comment on for not only you, but other people as well. Think of drawing as a martial art(Tae Kwon Do for example). What is the point of practicing advanced techinques when you have not even studied the basics; what is point of punching through concrete when can not even make a simple fist. By jumping ahead of yourself, you cause more harm than help to your ability. By jumping ahead to try out more advanced techniques, rather than learning the basics, reenforce unknown flaws, rather than correct them. Sure, you'll notice these mistakes when your good enough, but by then the damage has been done and it takes a very long time to reprogram yourself to follow the rules.

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Thunder Kick!!!

I forgot mention this earlier and I beleive I might have said this before. I would like you to have a page full of sketches fom life. Now noticed how I said sketches, which means I would like to see more one. Part of your problem now is that you do these huge drawing that take up the whole page. By reducing the size of these sketches, you force yourself to make less mistakes.

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Thunder Kick!!!

hey, no problem man, and a little something about me, I have indeed trained in judo, as well as taekwondo, my parents run a studio in owosso michigan. But I do indeed see your point. I will work on getting those pics in for ya.


Thanks!!

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I could be the best there is, but would'nt acknowledging this and becoming cocky make me the worst?
--Faron